Revisions to Pastiche:
After reading over the comments from the peer review, and re-reading my rough drafts I found certain things that needed to be fixed and improved. First off, I need to make my pastiche substantially longer. Additionally, I noticed that I could make my theme much more in depth and clear. Essentially, the purpose of my paper needs to be more focused on developing the theme. Also, to further mimic Hurston's writing style, I will incorporate more literary techniques, such as alliterations and better imagery. The flow of my pastiche was choppy and was not very smooth so I focused on changing the sentence structure of my pastiche to improve the flow.
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